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Deadliest Sin, PG, 100 words,

Title: Deadliest Sin
Characters: Helen, Nick
Rating: PG
Word count: 100
Summary: Pride is the worst of all the deadly sins.
Notes: Written for the 'Past Challenges' challenge on primeval100, using the recent challenge 'Pride'. Spoilers for 3x03 and 3x10.

Helen’s trouble, her father always said, was her pride.

That pride led her to the affair with Stephen; to her eight years absence.

Not now, Helen.

She was better than this.

...crackpot theories!

She’d show him.

That pride made her pull the trigger.

Know what, Helen? You’re not as smart as I thought you were.”

Suddenly the future didn’t matter: the shot was as impulsive a response as a book thrown across the room.

In that last remarkably clear moment, she knew that if a higher power existed, it had a twisted sense of humour.

Pride goes before a fall.


Posted by: Cordelia Delayne (cordeliadelayne)
Posted at: 15th July 2009 00:18 (UTC)
andrew-lee potts

Ooh, very good! Great look at Helen. :D

Posted by: remember my prophetic chickens (agapi42)
Posted at: 15th July 2009 00:34 (UTC)
Of course CoFD is canon!

Thank you! I'm still unsure about writing these characters, so it's lovely to hear I've done something right!

Posted by: fredbassett (fredbassett)
Posted at: 15th July 2009 19:31 (UTC)
Nick Helen

That was excellent! A great look at Helen and her motivations.

Posted by: remember my prophetic chickens (agapi42)
Posted at: 18th July 2009 12:57 (UTC)

Thank you very much!

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